Hey wait, Isnt the intro skit just from a Scott the Woz episode? I suggest you try slowing down your voice a little bit for the historical bits. You could also use more recording cuts in between paragraphs so you could be able to say the words in your script better. you could even use more talk sprites for the persona so that it follows along with the script more. overall, it's an alright video with plenty of room for improvements. keep up the good work!